ooohhhhh I love the colouring!!!! She's so cute >w<

Sorry crit time~~~~ you knew it was coming, didn't you!

First of all - anatomy. Her shoulders are too droopy at the ends, but her hands are great and so are her arms. Her lower legs are also disturbingly thin; and her upper legs don't seem to be connected to her bum and torso. Just make sure you sketch the body properly underneath the skirt... it's easy to forget! The face is quite good, except the line joining her chin and her neck (does that make sense?) should be bent down not up, and her head's a little flat (not so much that it's really obvious though)

Actually that's all for crit. I love the background, especially the .... spoons? XD;;; I can't tell but they're funky. HUZZAH FOR BACKWARDS PI CLOCKS!!!!!!!!!!! aaaaah brings out the maths nerds in all of us!

Anyway I shall end this freakishly long comment right here XD;; Very nice job!!!!

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"Your book tends to do twiddle, but I like hat" (Mrs Constable, maths C)

The only thing I can see that is wrong with this peice is how the legs flow at the end, it seems you either gave up or got tired at that point in the drawing.

It's a great picture though, and I love how the colors melt and the picture flows.

magnificult!!
I see that you draw better than before.
congratulation!


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yeah, i screwed up the legs :/
now when i sketch, i always 'air sketch' the rest of the legs under whatever clothes x)

got a character i made up now xD
will post it sometime in the future :3

lol~
thanks for all that though, you're always good like that :3
here's a cookie :'D

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thank you luntary x3
haven't heard from you in a while x3

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ahhh, you mean how it just fades at the bottom?
xD doh~! i forgot to cut that xD
i ran out of paper actually :'x

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ok glad to hear that!!!!!! x3

ooooooh character~~~~ so cool!!! >w< I can never keep interest in my characters.... lol.

YAY COOKIE!!!! *chomp*

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"Your book tends to do twiddle, but I like hat" (Mrs Constable, maths C)

I have ocuppated study for the september exam and which the new Course.

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lol, well, mine's just a boring ordinary character :/
no special powers, no real attributes xD
i just ending up testing myself to see whether i can keep drawing the same person from different angles :/
it's harder than it looks xD

i will post some inked sketches soon @_@

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